Thanks! I was a bit worse at writing at the time, but i think i have mostly fixed those issues by now in the future build! (specially point n.5 and the tenses mixing) Altought, could you explain to me what point n.4 means? id love to know if i need to work over it still
The GUI, graphical user interface sometimes didn't match. For example, you said the mail lead was expressionless/stoic as implied when she said she could really read him on their first meeting, but his face kept changing throughout the conversation. Also, it's probably hard to draw a character sitting down, but when they were having coffee, the male lead stood for almost the whole scene. It made the cafe look like the background.
ooh i see, yeah the coffee scene was supposed to have a cg for it, but since i ran out of time while making the game for the jam, i didn't include it. will put it in the update tho! thanks!
I loved the introduction and the first chapter. I really want to know more about Chester and his relationship with his family. I´d also like to know if he´ll have a rival in the next chapter. Greetings from Argentina!
Me encanto, el Chester es muy tierno! Ambiente del juego es acogedor y los diálogos son fáciles de comprender. Espero la actualización del juego completo con ansias!!💞
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ABSOLUTELY PEAK
SIX SEVEN MENTIONED
I LOVE IIIT
Hi! I tested your game and enjoyed it. A few things I noticed :
1. Some sentences mix tenses, making narration unclear.
2. MC's thoughts sometimes don't match the dialogue tense.
3. Choices have little impact; feels more like a personalized story than a game.
4. GUI occasionally doesn't match narration.
5. Some scenes conclusions feel rushed. eg: "In the end, things ended up alright". It felt too short and rushed for a conclusion.
6. Some coincidences felt unrealistic. This could just be a personal preference but it stood out.
You are good at creating tension, though. It kept me curious.
Played 51 minutes.
Tested with HP laptop, Windows
Thanks! I was a bit worse at writing at the time, but i think i have mostly fixed those issues by now in the future build! (specially point n.5 and the tenses mixing) Altought, could you explain to me what point n.4 means? id love to know if i need to work over it still
Hi.
The GUI, graphical user interface sometimes didn't match. For example, you said the mail lead was expressionless/stoic as implied when she said she could really read him on their first meeting, but his face kept changing throughout the conversation. Also, it's probably hard to draw a character sitting down, but when they were having coffee, the male lead stood for almost the whole scene. It made the cafe look like the background.
ooh i see, yeah the coffee scene was supposed to have a cg for it, but since i ran out of time while making the game for the jam, i didn't include it. will put it in the update tho! thanks!
You are most welcome
wait i lowk love him already
cade atualizaçao desse hit aq vei???
PLEASE WE NEED MOREEEEE, HES SO ADORABLE AND THE ART IS SO FREAKING CUTEEEEEE
HE'S SO FUCKING CUTE I WANNA SQUISH HIS FACE
Even though looks can be deceiving, Chester is really sweet.
Im crine he's 6'7
THATS WHAT I SAID he was ahead of his time
Waaa es muy lindooo amooo el estilo de dibujo
Will always be waiting for this game to continue developing (◍•ᴗ•◍)/❀
I played this game while ago, and I've just rediscovered it!! Can't wait for the next updates, good job! :D
obsessed..pls do continue!
Por favor ponlo para Android
I loved the introduction and the first chapter. I really want to know more about Chester and his relationship with his family. I´d also like to know if he´ll have a rival in the next chapter. Greetings from Argentina!
I NEED THE CHAPTER 2, THIS GAME IS PEAAAAAAAAAAAK
ughhhh i need CHAPTER 22222222222222 i love
OMG HE SO cute take time as You long as You want cause i would be waiting for an update!!
omg i need more of him!!!!!!!!!!!! he's so cute and soft i wanna hug him so baddd fkjlkgahdjafhghh
o melhor é pensar q uma brasileira fez isso, QUEREMOS O JOGO COMPLETO!
I love this Chester is so cute and tall I only 5'2 lol. Also take your time and take care of yourself.
im still working on the game! please stop sending me stuff in private, im just a normal person who did a game on her free time, im not a professional
its okayyy dont worryyy, take your time, i suposed than its just to share and support your proyect, love it take carEEee<
It's been a year or two now (not really sure), is an update coming? Because this is a nice game
en serio ame la demo, y chester es demasiado lindo, ya quiero ver otras facetas suyas, tmb espero con ansias el juego completo!
is this game in hiatus or discontinued?
anyone know when the next updates coming out?
When is the game going to FINISHHH
i can't wait for the update!!
gng its fall already i love chester sm and im so freaking excited for the full game!!!!
I love the artstyle! I hope there will be updates soon.
love this so far! chester is a cutie^^
chester is rlly cute also hoping that we get some background music when playing it was too quiet but overall im very intrested
THIS GAME IS SO GOOD OMG I NEED MORE!! CHESTER IS MY HUSBAND GUYS
what a gentle artstyle i like it a lot, really want to see more ^^
i really liked it! i hope this will be updated soon ^^
i love this!!! I need moreeee
It's been more than a year and I'm still waiting for him to comeback. I luv him so bad
Me encanto, el Chester es muy tierno! Ambiente del juego es acogedor y los diálogos son fáciles de comprender. Espero la actualización del juego completo con ansias!!💞
esta en español?
im actually in love with chester what the fart !?!??!